A mentor once told me, make no excuses for works in progress. State simply that they are a work in progress if you intend to ask for feedback. So, today's and the next couple or so are works in progress.
These two Summer Fairies are being threatened by:
These two Summer Fairies need to be in:
This is what we really need:
In other news, it is raining here. This is not currently, but may soon interfere with Sky Interwebz Connectivity.